Unsure and stuttering
you ask me
ask for everything
ask for too much
I refuse to take your pleas
to look at those desperate eyes
overflowing with pent up emotion
Leave me be
watch your reflection bounce back at you from cold glass
I have no time left to give
that's what you want, isn't it?
My time
more time
time, time, time
The sand in my hollow body has just about run out
leaving me empty
with false hopes that I might be turned over
giving me a few more hours on the clock
I used to be a work of art
now only cracked glass
wishing less life was wasted clinging to falling sand
I can give you other chances
if you help me
Fill my cracks with sincerity
repaint my chipped edges with bright smiles
I have yet to be fixed but I know it's possible
Mend me
only then can I give you the time you seek
It certainly seems to give the image of a broken bird scenario. The woman has many issues and is asking for someone to help. It is written like the woman is a statue- a Galatea. The statue has been damaged by emotional trauma and needs to be repaired through love and affection.
A very enjoyable piece of work. I hope you write more in the future.
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